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"Where did you learn to be so cruel ?"

"I learned it from you ..
You were supposed to love me, weren't you ?"

"I do."

"No, you don't.
I've slipped and tripped and fallen hard,
did you ever bother to help me up ?
Did it even cross your mind to try ?"

"..."

"You've caught me crying, many times before.
Did you ever ask what was wrong ?
Did you care to know ?
'Suck it up', you'd say, 'and quit the drama.'

How cold do you have to be to freeze ?"

"..."

"Despite it all, I'd like to let you know one thing,
It's Not Hate...
..It's Suffering..
"
Title-- It's Not Hate...It's Suffering....
-- From The Journal of the Killing Loves

The Journal of the Killing Loves -- ~ForgottenFirecracker
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:iconmauromunir:
MauroMunir Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Nice. How could do you have to be to freeze send shivers down my spine.

:)
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ForgottenFirecracker Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks. :)
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MauroMunir Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
cold* >w< sent*

the result of 4:36am writing. :P
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CrumbledWings Featured By Owner May 30, 2012
Awesome
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ForgottenFirecracker Featured By Owner May 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks :)
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musicnote854 Featured By Owner May 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is a great example of why being a writer is amazing. You can just write out, describe and express your feelings. Great job. :)
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ForgottenFirecracker Featured By Owner May 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much. : )
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braverave Featured By Owner May 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
this is a very good peace. i like how it ties to gether so well.
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:iconforgottenfirecracker:
ForgottenFirecracker Featured By Owner May 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you.
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braverave Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
your vry welcome:)!
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shaunafaye Featured By Owner May 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Sounds like this was a boy. I wrote something like this, about this. But it was about a friend not a boy, my best friend. But I'm ready to let her and memory's with go
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ForgottenFirecracker Featured By Owner May 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
It's actually more 'family' related ^^;
and I know how hard it is to let go of a best friend, but you still have to move on, right ? : )
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shaunafaye Featured By Owner May 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Of course. The poem I wrote let me just let go of everything with her. It's the beauty of pen and paper.
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ForgottenFirecracker Featured By Owner May 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes, yes it is. : )
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:iconshaunafaye:
shaunafaye Featured By Owner May 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
So this touched me and came right on time
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ImaginationOfMine Featured By Owner May 30, 2012  Student Photographer
I know exactly how this feels... It will take some time to get over, but it will happen... Sadly, it's just a big waiting game.
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ForgottenFirecracker Featured By Owner May 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah,.. I know.. and thanks.
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:iconimaginationofmine:
ImaginationOfMine Featured By Owner May 30, 2012  Student Photographer
I know you probably don't want to talk about it.. But I know what you are going through.. So if you wanna talk. I am here. :D
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ForgottenFirecracker Featured By Owner May 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
It's fine, and can I note you ?
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:iconimaginationofmine:
ImaginationOfMine Featured By Owner May 30, 2012  Student Photographer
Sure. :D
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